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5 | 对种族问题的麻木(性) |
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3 +1 | 欠缺种族敏感性 |
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4 | 对种族问题的冷漠 / 对种族问题漫不经心 |
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3 | 种族平等方面令人震惊的迟钝 |
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种族平等方面令人震惊的迟钝 Explanation: 翻成不敏感(性)很别扭 |
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欠缺种族敏感性 Explanation: 因为racial sensitivity还算是个比较常见的说法,所以建议在译文中保留这个“种族敏感性”,把否定的“in”变成中文的“欠缺”。所以shocking racial insensitivity就是“令人震惊地欠缺种族敏感性”。 另一种可能的译法是变成名词性的“缺失”,“令人震惊的种族敏感性缺失”。 供参考。 |
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对种族问题的冷漠 / 对种族问题漫不经心 Explanation: shocking racial insensitivity 对种族问题的极度冷漠 对种族问题使人震惊的冷漠 and fostered shocking racial insensitivity 并且助长一种对种族问题极度冷漠的态度 Insensible: a. Unaware; unmindful; 察觉不到; 漫不经心。 b. Not emotionally responsive; indifferent;没有情感反应;冷漠。 https://www.thefreedictionary.com/insensibility -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 day 12 hrs (2021-03-03 19:15:43 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- 这个 “种族问题” 是指 “工作环境中的种族歧视问题”,racial discrimination in the workplace. 语境里的最后两个字是 anti-discrimination policies. |
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对种族问题的麻木(性) Explanation: 一个例子:In these schools, indigenous children often face extreme forms of racism and are subjected to culturally irrelevant or insensitive curriculums. 译文为:在这种学校里,土著儿童往往遇到极端形式的种族主义,并且被迫接受与文化脱节或麻木不仁的课程。 麻木这个词语带有贬义色彩,“不敏感”不能很好地传达原文中的贬义色彩。 |
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