Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

sacred sentiment of conscious innocence that might redeem it

English answer:

a blessed feeling of knowing herself to be innocent ...

Added to glossary by B D Finch
Jan 21, 2019 17:12
5 yrs ago
English term

sacred sentiment of conscious innocence that might redeem it

English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature Literature
A girl telling that she is planning to pretend death so as to get away from people around her. But she also feels bad about it

for indeed I felt only the degradation of falsehood, and not any sacred sentiment of conscious innocence that might redeem it.

I could not understand the last part of the sentence. What is the sacred sentiment and conscious innocence in this context? Could anybody explain and paraphase it to be understandable? Thank you so much in advance
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Jan 22, 2019 18:36: B D Finch Created KOG entry

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B D Finch Jan 21, 2019:
@Asker I am puzzled by the fact that the way you phrased your question didn't reveal the source of your text. This is essential information. It is difficult, early 19th century language and the culture it is from is very foreign to modern, Western European ways of thinking. If you are translating it, that aspect needs to be embodied in your translation. It is not an easy text to translate.
philgoddard Jan 21, 2019:
Yes, I think that makes sense. I wasn't suggesting that you omit them from the translation, just pointing out that the sentence is easier to understand without them.
Maciej Bogucki Jan 21, 2019:
I think it makes more sense if you replace "sacred" with "righteous" and "conscious" with something along the lines of "rebellious".

I.e. she feels only shame, instead of the comfort of acting in the name of a righteous justification ("sacred sentiment") that would let her make a stand and protect herself ("conscious innocence") against whatever negative things that she's trying to get away from.

I wouldn't replace or drop them entirely though, if only because IMO "sacred" might tie to "redeem".
philgoddard Jan 21, 2019:
I agree that it's not clear. I don't know what is meant by "sacred" or "conscious", and if you leave them out it's much more understandable.

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a blessed feeling of knowing herself to be innocent ...

This is from Mary Shelley's "Matilda", written in the early 19th century. The language is semi-religious and should not be tidied up by omission of religious terms. Such an omission would lose essential information about Matilda's feelings and motives.

Matilda is thinking about her concealment of the reason for her father's suicide. As that reason was Matilda's father's incestuous passion for her, presumably she feels degraded by what she is concealing as well as her need to lie about it and go along with other people's mistaken ideas about why her father killed himself. So, she doesn't feel conscious of her own innocence. Such a consciousness would be sacred/blessed and would excuse and give her redemption for lying about what had happened.



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I've only scanned a bit of the book, but Matilda seems to be shown as a loving daughter to her father. If they were Church of England, then her father, as a suicide, would have been denied a Christian burial. She would have, probably, felt guilt about the incestuous passion that he had confessed to her and, therefore, guilt about his suicide and the damnation of his soul. Until 1882, in England, burials of suicides had to be carried out between 9pm and midnight. That would have been a really heavy burden.
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Peer comment(s):

agree British Diana
11 hrs
Thanks Diana
neutral Yvonne Gallagher : I think "sacred" means more like "cherished" "precious" here. "conscious innocence" is being innocent like a child with a vague feeling that something is wrong. Here, she knows it's wrong thus hasn't got precious "conscious innocence" as redeeming factor
14 hrs
Something sacred would, certainly, be precious, but the language is clearly, consistently religious.
agree katsy : I would say that sacred is to be taken literally -ie, blessed as in religious, blessed by God. When you know you are innocent (conscious innocence), then the falsehood may be redeemed, ie forgiven . // not human forgiveness, absolutely! Redeemed is clear!
14 hrs
Thanks katsy. I understand her lack of "conscious innocence" to mean that her falsehood couldn't be redeemed and her soul saved. So, it wouldn't be human forgiveness that she hoped for.
agree Suharti Ningsih
6 days
Thanks Suhati
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