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Glossary entry

español term or phrase:

Ahora que has visto el blanco del invierno, ven a conocer el verde del verano

inglés translation:

You've seen us in our winter white, come and see us again in our summer green

    The asker opted for community grading. The question was closed on 2011-07-07 16:54:16 based on peer agreement (or, if there were too few peer comments, asker preference.)
Jul 4, 2011 15:40
12 yrs ago
español term

Ahora que has visto el blanco del invierno, ven a conocer el verde del verano

español al inglés Otros Publicidad / Relaciones públicas lenguaje publicitario
Se trata de una frase publicitaria en la que se anuncia la temporada de verano de una estación de esquí.
Proposed translations (inglés)
4 +14 You've seen us in our winter white, come and see us again in our summer green
4 Now that you have seen the white of winter, come meet the green of summer.
4 now you’ve seen our white winter, come to experience our green summer

Proposed translations

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17 minutos
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You've seen us in our winter white, come and see us again in our summer green

A slightly punchier and friendlier version might work well for promotional purposes.

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Note added at 30 mins (2011-07-04 16:11:01 GMT)
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Prompted by Charles's comment about "again", I think this is slightly better:

You've seen us in our winter white, now come and see us in our summer green
Peer comment(s):
agree Charles Davis : Works very well. I'd leave out "again". Or possibly "now come and see us..." // That's perfect, Gilla. Alert the printers forthwith.
4 minutos
Yes, thanks Charles, and I agree with you, it scans better without again! Perhaps "now come and see us in our winter green"
agree Bubo Coroman (X) : A lovely way to phrase it poetically while respecting 100% the copywriter's choice of imagery
5 minutos
Thanks Deborah!
agree David Ronder
10 minutos
Thanks, David.
agree Daniel Rodrigues : I agree. I would just delete "again" and add "along": "..., come along and see us in our..."
33 minutos
Thanks DR, yes that has a nice ring to it too.
agree Emma Goldsmith : I like both your options
1 hora
thanks, Emma!
agree Elizabeth Joy Pitt de Morales : Lovely!
1 hora
thanks, Elizabeth!
agree Victoria Frazier
3 horas
thanks, Victoria
agree FVS (X)
3 horas
thanks, FVS
agree Christine Walsh : Great!
4 horas
thanks, Christine!
agree Jenni Lukac (X) : Really nice! I think that "again" is fine. It's about repeat business.
6 horas
thanks, Jenni!
agree Marcelo González : Two really good options. Well done :-)
8 horas
thanks, Marcelo!
agree Yvonne Gallagher : nice!
8 horas
thanks, gallagy!
agree philgoddard : Well up to your usual standard.
10 horas
why, thank you so much, Phil!
agree Marian Vieyra
19 horas
thanks, Marian
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4 minutos

Now that you have seen the white of winter, come meet the green of summer.

creo que esto funciona

Mike
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1 hora

now you’ve seen our white winter, come to experience our green summer

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